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Welp. This page gave me nothing but trouble for the past two weeks, and I can't honestly say that I'm satisfied with the result in the slightest. Oh well, live and learn. :I

10th Aug 2012, 2:12 AM





Well, I guess this is the end of Meed's cameo in Wake the Sleepers.

10th Aug 2012, 3:07 AM

..Or is it? 8I Dun dun DUNNNit probably is.

15th Aug 2012, 12:21 PM

No, guy in the helmet! You don't scream "SNEAK ATTACK!" when you're trying to sneak attack!

10th Aug 2012, 6:57 AM

tsh noobs when well they .......oh right hes dead............

12th Aug 2012, 9:03 PM

But it makes you swing harder! Right!? YEAH

15th Aug 2012, 12:21 PM

"I'll let you kill me and take the bounty...
...
OR YOU CAN HAVE WHAT'S BEHIND DOOR NUMBER 2!!!"

10th Aug 2012, 7:04 AM

Which is DEATH 8I

Also that video brings back way too many memories of my childhood. Man I loved that show. :'D

15th Aug 2012, 12:22 PM

I love that almost annoyed look in the first panel. By the last one, he's like, "okay, now you're just obnoxious."

Also, thank you for just putting it up. We understand if a page isn't working. And I think it's good. 'Course, I'm a writer, not an artist so, I wouldn't know. :D

10th Aug 2012, 11:55 AM

Thanks very much! :D That means a lot~

Haha, Madoc just has not had an easy day, all things considered. Not as bad as Locke, but still. :I

15th Aug 2012, 12:23 PM

There's a few words in there I don't understand....guh?, tch?, and ghk? Could you please tell me what they mean?

10th Aug 2012, 12:55 PM

Its basically like a sound effect. "Guh" in panel three is from the wind getting knocked out of him while the pain of being slammed onto the hard ground. "Tch" in panel four is more of a disappointing angry sound, can be used differently however. "Ghk" in panel 6 could be taken as when the blade sunk into him he made a cry of pain but it came out as that or it was just from the blood in his throat. That is however just my opinion on it and it could be different ^-^

10th Aug 2012, 3:44 PM

LOL love your explanations

11th Aug 2012, 7:53 AM

Those are all exactly right! :D Whew~ (the sound of a relieved sigh)

15th Aug 2012, 12:24 PM

JR
Great story you're telling, Kristy. Very much enjoying your work.

Hopefully I am just missing a detail that would explain this, but in the third panel, shouldn't there be at least the pointed end of Madoc's sword showing below and behind his adversaries leg?

Thanks again for all your work.

10th Aug 2012, 8:22 PM

While I'm not Kristy, I think you're just missing it. The blade isn't all that long, I gathered, not to mention it's hiding behind both Madoc's legs, AND the helmed dude's. So you might not see it. If you did, it would probably be the very /point/ of it.

12th Aug 2012, 12:08 AM

JR
Behind his own leg, too? Considering where the blade is positioned in panel two, Madoc would Have to swing the blade back and behind his leg on purpose which would put his sword out of action until he moves it Back from behind. Zero reason for him to do that. He's better than that. Also, just view the blade length in any of the other panels and compare it's length to anything in that panel. It's a short sword, I grant you, but it ain't That short.

It doesn't matter if this gets resolved or not, Onasaki, Kristy, you're still telling a fine story.
Thank you.

12th Aug 2012, 7:47 PM

Thank you~ I appreciate the comments! :D

Mm, you're absolutely right. I had it in the sketch, but it somehow got lost in the inking process. They should be behind the guy's legs, but the foreshortening isn't quiiiiite enough to hide it completely. I will fix! Thanks again!

15th Aug 2012, 12:25 PM

I think its a fine page, keep up the good work!

12th Aug 2012, 1:07 PM

Thank you, sir! :)

15th Aug 2012, 12:26 PM

in panel 5, it is very close to what happend in my comic! Amago with the sword, knite laying on the ground begging for mercy... but knite lived, i wish i can say that for the soldier guy!

12th Aug 2012, 3:08 PM

Amago seems to be a nicer guy than Madoc! :O

15th Aug 2012, 12:27 PM

QUIET!!!!

It's time for my theme music!

As far as the page goes, the fact that you aren't satisfied is good, as you know you can still improve. However, it was a top notch page, so congratulate yourself regardless.

13th Aug 2012, 1:56 AM

"STOP"

That's true, I guess! Just gotta keep looking forward. :D Thanks!

15th Aug 2012, 12:30 PM

Ok, that just gave me the mental image of Madoc doing that dance. Flippin made my day right there.

17th Aug 2012, 4:41 PM

Nyohohoho~ >:3

If only I had the animating skills... Madoc would be doing the hammer dance right now.

23rd Aug 2012, 11:03 PM

Love the action scene

14th Aug 2012, 5:39 PM

Thank you~!

15th Aug 2012, 12:30 PM

I love her bird just hanging out there, watching everything going on. He is such a cute little spy! :)

17th Aug 2012, 6:34 PM

.......ho-how did you see that! o.o

17th Aug 2012, 10:43 PM

He is a sneaky one. o-o

23rd Aug 2012, 11:04 PM