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Action scenes are kind of totally my bane. :I I did the best I could...

13th Mar 2014, 11:21 PM





Push those poses!

14th Mar 2014, 12:20 AM

I'm tryingggg. It's difficult for me! Must practice more... D:

21st Mar 2014, 12:47 PM

I think you did a great job. Looks pretty cool to me!

14th Mar 2014, 1:01 AM

Thank you, sir! :D

21st Mar 2014, 12:47 PM

Your work shows growth with every page you post, and now twice weekly! YAY

14th Mar 2014, 4:09 AM

Thank you! I'm doing my best!

Well... almost twice weekly. Some slip-ups already. Bah!

21st Mar 2014, 12:48 PM

It happens!

..as long as we're getting more, more, MORE! :)

21st Mar 2014, 3:20 PM

Yay! Having faith and checking back paid off. Good work and I agree every page shows growth. It's an engaging story. I look forward to seeing where it's going.

14th Mar 2014, 5:46 AM

Thank you very much. ^^ I look forward to showing it!

21st Mar 2014, 12:48 PM

Just lettin' ya know that if I was a girl still in high school, I would've probably printed out that last panel and hung it up in my locker. <3

...I am eating this entire scene up! ^.^

14th Mar 2014, 8:27 AM

Hahaha~! Excellennnt. B3

And this entire scene is eating me alive. D8 So out of my comfort zone...

21st Mar 2014, 12:50 PM

Maddoc is really toying with him. He must be truly uber. I wonder what a real challenge would be to him? Godzilla?

14th Mar 2014, 11:50 AM

No, Madoc could kill Godzilla. Think bigger.

14th Mar 2014, 7:38 PM

Madoc has actually killed a large lizard or two or five in his time.

... Maybe not Godzilla-sized though. He'll have to add that to his wishlist.

21st Mar 2014, 12:51 PM

If your art is perfect, then you're doing it wrong! I think this page is splendid.

I'm eager to see how Ren figures into this scene; she wasn't that far behind Oralee, was she? And how about our avian friend Ebiri?

14th Mar 2014, 2:31 PM

You speak wisely! Always room to improve~

She wasn't too far, so she should be popping up fairly soon. Hopefully not too late!

And Ebiri is a smart little bird, I doubt he'll be anywhere near there if Ren doesn't want him to be.

21st Mar 2014, 12:52 PM

The page looks great! You are a wonderful artist.

So when is Madoc going to get serious?

14th Mar 2014, 3:42 PM

Aww, thank you. ^^ That means so much!

Madoc? Serious? Pfffbbt.

21st Mar 2014, 12:53 PM

Madoc-come at me bro, or have you had enough
Evil Locke-.....
Madoc-weeeellll
Evil Locke-FUSRODAH

14th Mar 2014, 10:14 PM

Madoc: Let me guess, someone stole your sweetroll.

21st Mar 2014, 12:56 PM

XD yah lol, but in all seriousness. Beautiful art this page and last. I thoroughly enjoy your comic. It brings joy to my weekend. See you monday

14th Mar 2014, 10:16 PM

Aww, thank you!

Gotta get better about updating. 8I MUST.

21st Mar 2014, 12:57 PM

I try to figured out what was wrong in the scene and like said Danger Schade poses are a little too static. Balance of people are different when they mouve faster, they have tendency to have the uper part of their body going foward.
Trying to mime those scene could help a lot.

And if you want to gave the feelling of speed you could break the ligne and had some blur effect ( here is video that show you what i mean : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IWhBMmt6WRk )

16th Mar 2014, 12:10 PM

Thanks for the tips. ^^

21st Mar 2014, 12:57 PM

Whoa, I haven't been on here in a while.

WHOA!!! Maddoc, be careful!! Well.... I think he'll be just fine, but... STILL BE CAREFUL!!! XD

17th Mar 2014, 7:16 PM

Heyyy, welcome back! :D Was wondering where you wandered off to!

Careful is Madoc's middle name! ... *snrk*

I couldn't type that with a straight face.

21st Mar 2014, 12:58 PM

I just caught up with reading Wake The Sleeper! ^.^

Love the story, the pace moves smoothly enough to know what's going on, without having a rushed feel to it. I really appreciate that!

And your art is so well done! The colours and line-art make it easy for me to imagine this as an animated film.

Keep up the good work!
~ Pris

18th Mar 2014, 12:34 PM

Wooh, nice work getting through the archive! ^^

Thank you, you're too kind! Sometimes I worry about the pacing, but looking back, I'm really happy with how it's turning out.

I would absolutely love to see this animated one day. *o* A pipe dream of mine~

Thanks again! I'll do my best! <3

21st Mar 2014, 1:06 PM

I love it and love the storyline. Maybe you create 4-5 signature moves then reuse them. But even if you didn't the aftereffects drawings paint enough of the picture. Please continue!

23rd May 2014, 8:12 AM

Nice action sequence.

It looked like Locke's was missing a hand and just swinging a stump in the third panel.

4th Jul 2015, 11:24 PM