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Hmmm... switching to .png didn't help with the bubbles :/ Maybe a 1.5 - 2 point stroke on the bubbles? Or is that a good effect? Do you like how it looks?

I realize that it looks weird to me, but I might be in the minority here, and should be learning from you instead of trying to get you to change to what I think is right...

Well done on the art though, I really like the map and the characters are great as usual ;)

1st May 2011, 11:06 PM

Ffffff, I really thought I had them looking all right this time. Hmm. I'll try something else...

1st May 2011, 11:07 PM

I love how you put the speech bubbles over the map here. That's such a neat idea! Also, I wonder what she has for him!!!

1st May 2011, 11:13 PM

Thanks, Skrael~!

Maybe it's candy. Locke loves candy. :O

1st May 2011, 11:39 PM

"One more thing before you go... You left your bra here last night."

1st May 2011, 11:56 PM

I've lost all respect for Locke as a hero if he wears a bra o.O

2nd May 2011, 2:53 AM

What's Oralee gonna do!? Will she tag along? Will Locke let her? Will she just go back home? What is Ilara going to give Locke? Where does Madoc fit into all this? Is his target in Trontia? IS HIS TARGET LOCKE? SO MANY QUESTIONS!!!

Btw I like the way you were doing the bubbles in chapter 1. More specifically towards the end of chapter 1.

2nd May 2011, 7:34 AM

Ugh, Locke doesn't seem like much of a combat-oriented guy. I hope he doesn't get too many random encounters on the way there.

2nd May 2011, 7:39 AM

He has armor, and he was called a soldier, so he's got at least that much.

8th Aug 2012, 7:26 PM

I love every single thing about this comic.

2nd May 2011, 7:51 AM

No offense to, well, everyone, but quite frankly, there's no better comic on ComicFury than Wake the Sleepers. It's just. that. dang. good. ;)

For specifically that reason; I agree, in that I love everything in this comic. :)

8th Aug 2012, 7:28 PM

I like your bubbles! =D

2nd May 2011, 8:40 AM

Based on the ellipses, I'd say it involves Oralee. Course I have the feeling even if it isn't, Oralee is going to go with Locke anyways. Great page as usual

2nd May 2011, 8:46 AM

Hopefully she's going to give him her mother's address.

2nd May 2011, 9:01 PM

@Zomburai; I'm betting he uses kick ass magic, special demonic powers or something to defend against those random enconters.

3rd May 2011, 4:48 AM

Beautiful page. The map is a good visual. Nice to get our bearings. I don't see any hitches with the speech bubbles or text. So on my screen it all looks dandy.

3rd May 2011, 10:05 AM

@MatthewJA: ... What. D:

@D_Man: It's totally not a bra, I promise. MATT, YOU TROUBLEMAKER.

@Shaggers: So many questions. SO MANY.

Hmm, I've heard that the bubbles in my previous chapter had too much space, so I switched to hand-drawn bubbles for this chapter. Maybe I'll try something new in Chapter 3? Hahaha.

@Zomburai: Haha, I suddenly imagined Locke walking on the World Map like an oldschool RPG game and encountering random jellies and Goblins and stuff. >_>

@Kimmy: Thanks! I'm still trying to get them looking better, though...

@LakethePondling: Thank you~! Oralee is definitely thinking of something... :O

@Moizmad: Haha, that would be helpful, wouldn't it? :I

@D_Man: He'll just throw the amulet at them, and they'll all explode~.

@Midnight: Thanks so much, Midnight! The map was kind of last minute, but it was nice to get some information about the outside world into the page. :D I'm hoping to have a full map ready soon to stick in the About section!

3rd May 2011, 7:26 PM

@Kristy
Is that a one time use item?

4th May 2011, 9:37 AM

I suppose if it actually worked that way, it would be. I'm sure there's a cheat code for infinite uses, though!

4th May 2011, 10:00 AM

What do you mean, if??? ;)

4th May 2011, 9:04 PM

Well, it doesn't work that way, but if it did, that's probably how it would work!

That's all I meant. D: I'm not trying to be tricky, I swear!

4th May 2011, 10:47 PM

Until I see otherwise, in my mind all that amulet does is explode and cause diseases :P

5th May 2011, 9:42 AM

Haha, fair enough!

Glad to see you got an account, by the way! :D Welcome to Comic Fury~

5th May 2011, 1:11 PM

Please let the girl go with him. XD

14th Feb 2012, 1:28 PM