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P. 61, Panel 1: [Same view as p. 60, panel 5, except the town is up in flames.]

Now she HAS to go with him. :D

15th May 2011, 11:04 PM

SUDDENLY, A DRAGON.

15th May 2011, 11:05 PM

Whatno. Stow away under his giant capey thing, Oralee. D:

15th May 2011, 11:05 PM

AWWW! Locke! You heartbreaker!

15th May 2011, 11:05 PM

Oralee is seriously too cute for words! <3

15th May 2011, 11:06 PM

Awwww, Oralee ;_____; So happy in the first panel, so SAD then. ;____;
Awwww

15th May 2011, 11:09 PM

I think I'm the first boy to comment on this.
GO ORALEE! Hide Speedracer style in the trunk of his car dragon!

15th May 2011, 11:48 PM

I think bin Laden's compound is around there, look for 12 ft walls and barb-wire.

16th May 2011, 1:40 AM

'^'

16th May 2011, 3:08 AM

[Insert witty, yet moving comment here]

[/Insomnia]

...that never works...

16th May 2011, 4:50 AM

...Nnoooo D:
Quick, Oralee! Employ the teary eyes D:!

16th May 2011, 5:12 AM

Kick him in the shin.

16th May 2011, 6:54 AM

Locke, m'man, she's going to follow anyway. How do you not see this happening?

16th May 2011, 7:26 AM

@Tamdrin: It's a little short to stow away under. :< Climb on his back, Oralee! He'll never know!

@Streak: And we wonder why Locke will never get a woman. :I

@Kimmy: Too cute indeed. >:I She'll no doubt use her powers for evil!

@TLR: She's just a maelstrom of emotion! D:

@DM5: Hahaha, you noticed the girl thing too? ...Hiding in the trunk of his dragon would be...awkward.

@Moizmad: ...I totally should've put that in there.

@MattewJA: :<

@Jrade: [insert witty retort to witty, yet moving comment]

[/dry humor]

I know what you mean... :I

@Ice: GO GO GADGET TEARY EYES

@D_Man: I'm sure that'll work. Give him a bruised shin and overwhelming guilt, and he'll do whatever you want. D:

@Zomburai: I know, right. Locke apparently can't see the web banner above his head and the 'About' section with a list of main characters. Get with it, Locke!

16th May 2011, 8:19 AM

YOU MEANIE MADOC!! (Is that his name?) BUT I STILL LIKE YOU ANYWAYS!

16th May 2011, 8:51 AM

Haha, this guy is Locke. Madoc is the jerk-face in the red hood. Their names kind of end the same, so it's understandable to get them mixed up. o_o

Poor Locke doesn't want to be a meanie... D:

16th May 2011, 9:04 AM

AUGGHHH I got too far behind *flails*

Another great update, I love how you actually care about the layout of the town and setting in general, more than most people do.

But that is pretty depressing you know...Oralee is too cute to get left behind! :<

16th May 2011, 10:35 AM

You just know Oralee is going to find a way to tag along, Locke just doesn't know it yet. :D

The buildings in the bottom panel are not that bad! Don't sell yourself short!

16th May 2011, 2:01 PM

It's funny because you already know she's going with him whether he likes it or not. :9

16th May 2011, 5:28 PM

Think about it. The guy's running from something really dangerous. The last thing he wants is to bring a sweet person like Oralee into the line of fire.

16th May 2011, 8:20 PM

I bet she follows him :) I love this comic, I'm showing friends and everyone and stuff!

17th May 2011, 2:27 AM

great artwork

17th May 2011, 2:59 PM

wake the sleepers is at the time i am typing this 3rd in all time popular.
that is all.

17th May 2011, 3:00 PM

@Therebeunicorns: Welcome back! :D Well, at least it's kind of nice to be able to read more than one page at a time?

Eeeh, the hard things about backgrounds for me are a) being consistent, and b) filling the space with enough stuff to be believable. I'm not satisfied with just plunking buildings on a dirt turf, but I seem to lack creativity in that area. :I I must work on that!

It is kind of depressing... Which is why we are floating away. We're escaping the rejection! D:

@Purplefire: Poor Locke. He doesn't seem to know a lot of things, doesn't he? :I

Aaaah, thanks. :c They still need a lot more work, though. I'll get the hang of it! Eventually...

@JessieJess: Oralee does come across as rather persistent. :I And Locke is such a softie.

@ArchangelM127: Yes, exactly! I'm sure he'd love the company, but that's not really an option for him.

@Metsfan: I hope she does. D: Locke needs a friend.

Yaaaay, I'm glad that you enjoy it~!

@Hythlodeus: Thank you very much!

@Spinnerlink: Yes indeed. o_o Let's just hope it stays there for a while!

18th May 2011, 7:31 AM

like this story an drawings, except the last panel. The town looks like what an american suburb inhabitant think is a medieval town. If its a defended town (the wall suggests it, space would be rare within the defending walls and houses would be attached/ interlocked to each other. Streets would be narrow, with only space left for one carriage (or even less)

greetings

26th May 2011, 4:25 AM

Hello, egon!

I couldn't agree with you more. The wall is treated more like a boundary than a defensive wall (it's only about waist-high), so I don't have a problem with the buildings being linked together. But I definitely agree that the roads should be much smaller. The root of the problem can be found in that I didn't make a map for Amanton. :I So I was just making stuff up as I went. Bad idea.

I won't make that mistake for Trontia, though. It's all about the learning process~. :D Thanks for the comment!

26th May 2011, 7:33 AM

whats the purpose of a waist high city boundary? ;-) Even towns without defenses wouldn´t be scattered.

http://www.geolinde.musin.de/bild/deutschlandost/erfurt/Bilder/Erfurt%20Blick%20vom%20Kirchturm%208_JPG.jpg

it´s rather a matter of space. the romans founded checkered towns but even then several houses built a combined structure... it´s not the wall its the single houses which mhh.. irritate me.

greetings

27th May 2011, 6:35 AM

To be a marker of the town limits, I figure. Honestly (and to my embarrassment), I hadn't thought much about it. It was more for aesthetics.

The single houses and large roads bother me as well. I'm not going to defend my mistakes; we're in agreement. All I can do is learn from this and try to make the next town better.

27th May 2011, 7:51 AM

Somehow, I know she's going to go, no matter if he likes it or not. XD

14th Feb 2012, 1:41 PM