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:O

Locke, I declare.

EDIT (seems like I'm doing this a lot lately):
The Q&A for Chapter 1 is now up in the Extras section! Chapter 2's will be up soon.

The music playlist is also up, if anyone is into that. o~o

14th Nov 2011, 12:00 AM





looks like he don't need no rape whistle

14th Nov 2011, 12:02 AM

Did I just get first again? I think/hope I did :D

14th Nov 2011, 12:02 AM

second best oh second best.... wait ...2,3,4,5,6... 7th best oh 7th best :(

14th Nov 2011, 5:24 AM

Indeed he does not... o~o

14th Nov 2011, 2:23 PM

Is his true self some kind of... person who goes gallivanting around with many, many women?

15th Nov 2011, 1:35 AM

Even their magic is getting it on! Its meant to be!

Ooh...Locke's dark side perhaps? >:3

14th Nov 2011, 12:16 AM

Hahaha, what. o_o

Perhaps. >:3 Or maybe Locke is just enjoying it. 8I

14th Nov 2011, 2:42 PM

You could say he is love locked.

14th Nov 2011, 12:17 AM

I tried so hard to think of a pun in response to this.

But I got nuffin'. :C

14th Nov 2011, 2:44 PM

I'm sure there's a master key out there somewhere.

15th Nov 2011, 6:34 AM

I guess there is bound to be one or two.

15th Nov 2011, 6:41 PM

:I Well as long as Locke is happy, right?

14th Nov 2011, 12:26 AM

I guess... :I

15th Nov 2011, 12:21 PM

Hello? Operator?

I'd like to report a potential rape.

jk ;D

14th Nov 2011, 2:04 AM

I'm not sure how an operator would feel about a rape report. D: "I.. I just transfer calls!"

15th Nov 2011, 12:22 PM

"Man Locke is going to be so weirded out by that kis-oh boy :I"

14th Nov 2011, 4:07 AM

Pretty much exactly what I was thinking. :I

15th Nov 2011, 12:22 PM

He will wake up and finding himself kissing some tree or something.

14th Nov 2011, 5:22 AM

Hahaha so true.

14th Nov 2011, 6:25 AM

Hahaha! With Ren watching. How awkward. c_c

15th Nov 2011, 12:23 PM

This page does not fill me with confidence. Certainly not the evil smile at the end there. :I

14th Nov 2011, 8:46 AM

What ever do you mean?

>:3

15th Nov 2011, 12:23 PM

Wait, is ren on HER side? Also, i hope that lady is not just using him.

14th Nov 2011, 11:29 AM

Ren and the fire woman? Hmm, that's an interesting idea~

15th Nov 2011, 12:24 PM

Black eyes, dark skin, is she an Espian?

14th Nov 2011, 2:02 PM

She is! :D I'm glad someone noticed~

15th Nov 2011, 12:24 PM

and now she'll say "Locke. i am your mother." ._.

14th Nov 2011, 2:25 PM

Wait what. D:

I don't even... How... o~o How did you jump to that?

15th Nov 2011, 12:25 PM

probably because my mind got lost in a forest. <.<
only madness found its way...

wait. is that fireplace whats left of it? 8U

15th Nov 2011, 6:12 PM

I like that their magics are interracting. Pretty neat visual. :)

14th Nov 2011, 6:27 PM

Thank you~ *0* Still need to work on pinning down Locke's magic a bit...

15th Nov 2011, 12:25 PM

NO LOCKE DON'T IT'S A TRAP

14th Nov 2011, 7:46 PM

TOO LATE

15th Nov 2011, 12:26 PM

AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH D:

15th Nov 2011, 5:34 PM

So, I've read your comic. I like the art style,

15th Nov 2011, 6:15 PM

Accidentally hit the enter key during my last post. continuing on, I like the art style, I like the setting, some of the characters seem cliched, but still good (of course, not really much character development has happened yet). The only thing I'm not sold on yet is the story, mainly because there's not much to grab a hold of here. Don't really know any of the characters motivations (besides the obvious), and the plot is vague as of the moment. Maybe it's just me, but for me to want to read a story, I usually like to be invested with the characters or the plot, and I simply don't know enough at this time to have that anchor. However, your art and the basis you have for your characters is still better than most webcomics I've seen when they start, so I'm willing to keep up with your posts to see how things go.

15th Nov 2011, 6:34 PM

Also, sometimes you make Oralee's eyes HUGE!!! Like, gargantuan. I think it's mostly when she's closer to the front, but it does seem like the proportions are off every once in a while. But, I'm not an artist, so maybe you're doing it right, and I'm just clueless to it.

15th Nov 2011, 6:38 PM

Or perhaps Oralee's eyes just Get huge when she is closer, like a super power!

16th Nov 2011, 2:06 AM

I know that things get bigger when they're closer, that's why I said I think the proportions might be off sometimes. Really though, it's a minor concern, as it could also be a stylistic choice (maybe I just like regular sized eyes, and the author/artist doesn't)

17th Nov 2011, 2:02 PM

Hey, thanks for stopping by and reading. I appreciate your comment!

The characters haven't had much time to show their full personalities, but hopefully they won't seem so cliche once you get to know them better. I've tried to make each of them unique, but I'm still learning and am far from being a great writer.

It's true that the story seems vague. It was intentionally made this way in order to discover things alongside the characters. Right now, they know very little, but it's slowly building to a point where everything will come together and the main conflict/motivation will be revealed. It's just going to take some time before that happens. I hope that you'll be patient with me and my story before passing too much judgment. :)

I agree, Oralee's eyes got kind of huge for a while there and should've been drawn smaller. It's been mentioned by several readers, and I'm going to try to keep them under control in the future.

Thanks again for the comment.

17th Nov 2011, 2:30 PM

Locke! Aww, crap.
You know, those inner demons? Not your friend. <nods wisely>

16th Nov 2011, 2:07 AM

But they're so warm and pretty~... *o* Like a bug zapper.

17th Nov 2011, 2:32 PM

The way he's smirking there creeps me out. D:

15th Feb 2012, 12:20 PM