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Locke is totally the most angriest person you will ever meet. :I

13th Apr 2012, 1:00 AM


also d'awworalee

13th Apr 2012, 1:04 AM

Aw dagnabbit, typing at 2am. I can't waht is giong on I dotn kwno aaaaaa

13th Apr 2012, 1:06 AM

locke has the powers of darnkess

I can only fathom what they do

13th Apr 2012, 1:10 AM

I'm sure I don't know what you're talking about!

>_> <_<

13th Apr 2012, 1:13 AM

unless I saved it


13th Apr 2012, 1:15 AM


Then you can put it next to bunch of pages where I drew the thumbs on the wrong side of the hand.

It'll be like a gallery...

...of failure. D':

13th Apr 2012, 9:20 AM

Darnkess is so a word. Really! :P

9th Aug 2012, 12:34 AM

:I definitely.

Look at that boiling rage in those deep, hateful eyes of his.

What a...monster.
Piercing that heartless, wicked gaze into our very souls. >:|

13th Apr 2012, 1:17 AM



13th Apr 2012, 2:43 AM

*snuggles away Locke's Darkness*

There we go! I fixed it! You're all welcome!

13th Apr 2012, 8:19 AM

Hahaha, Band~ *u* So perfect. The wrath, it just radiates~


Welp, Sarah just fixed the entire story. You can all go home now! :O

13th Apr 2012, 9:21 AM

I can't even look at that face, so full of rage.

13th Apr 2012, 10:32 PM

Rage and darkness huh? The fourth panel begs to differ.

13th Apr 2012, 5:10 AM

It really does. Pretty much all of Locke's actions so far are contrary to what she's saying. D:

13th Apr 2012, 9:23 AM

Usually the roles in this scenario are reversed. Usually it's the father who doesn't want the daughter going with the angry magic boy.

Also nice new banner. The eyes! O.O

13th Apr 2012, 6:36 AM

Yeah, their relationship is a bit flopped. Turan is easygoing and trusting, and Ren is very cautious and stoic. I think she feels like the parent sometimes. 8I

The eeeeeeeeyes, they stare into your soul and beckon you to read. o__o

13th Apr 2012, 10:09 AM

Ohh nice work on her expression in panel 6. So perfect.

13th Apr 2012, 7:52 AM

Thank you, sir~!

13th Apr 2012, 10:10 AM

Are... are those rocks on her earrings?

And a required D'AWWWWW for Oralee once again. :3

13th Apr 2012, 10:09 AM

They're rough beads that are attached to hair behind her ear (Turan's is the same way). Not actually attached to her earlobe. That would stretch it like craaaaazy.

The earring itself is just a simple gauge.

Oralee requires all of your D'AWWWWs. All of them. *u*

13th Apr 2012, 10:15 AM

As we should be always happy to provide them to our humble master Oralee

13th Apr 2012, 4:39 PM

Rage is not necessarily a negative emotion in the sense of evil. Rage can be the fire that brings forth positive action.

13th Apr 2012, 2:10 PM

Aye! It all depends on its purpose.

14th Apr 2012, 4:00 PM

Power is only dangerous in the wrong hands.

13th Apr 2012, 3:02 PM

And in this case, the power (whatever it may be) is in... this man's hands. :I


The world is doomed.

14th Apr 2012, 4:03 PM

Evil needs love too...

13th Apr 2012, 3:21 PM

It's so misunderstood. :<

14th Apr 2012, 4:03 PM

Love the new avatar! :D

13th Apr 2012, 5:06 PM

Thank you~! :D Figured it was about time for a change.

14th Apr 2012, 4:03 PM

He's much more than she realizes as in he can do a backflip.

13th Apr 2012, 7:12 PM

Yesssss, the power of the backflip must be preserved at all costs. 8I

14th Apr 2012, 4:04 PM

The whole rage thing is interesting, he seems so cuddly and nice, must know the details of this dark side.

13th Apr 2012, 10:33 PM

All in due time, nyohoho. o-o

14th Apr 2012, 4:04 PM

Nicely done. Thanks for the comic.

14th Apr 2012, 8:35 AM

Thanks very much!

14th Apr 2012, 4:04 PM

Panel two makes it look like Ren is answering a question in school or something.

"An overwhelming rage against the machine. unlike anything I have ever heard before".

14th Apr 2012, 7:59 PM

Also can they get rid of the darkness by casting magic missile at it.

15th Apr 2012, 10:31 PM

Ren's way of speaking is pretty formal. Very few contractions and whatnot. Also that would be the best school ever. :O

... I see what you did there. *Gets the Mountain Dew*

17th Apr 2012, 4:21 PM

In the last panel Ren looks like she's thinking," fine, i will help him, but as soon as I am out of your sight, i am giving him to the Espian!"

15th Apr 2012, 12:37 PM

Haha, she wouldn't do something like that! She went through the trouble of protecting him and bringing him home. D: Although I think she would've preferred if Locke just went without her.

17th Apr 2012, 8:25 AM

humm.... is the darkness in his hand? we must cut it off!!

15th Apr 2012, 12:55 PM

If only it was so simple. D: Then I wouldn't have a story!

17th Apr 2012, 8:25 AM

...Bu...but...then you could have a chainsaw! D:

Or at the very least, a robotic gauntlet replacement arm which somehow is created in the Medieval times. :P

9th Aug 2012, 12:38 AM

I don't really like the way the back of the head is done in the third panel, her hairline (skull? idk) should at least be brought done to jawline level. As it is, her head seems squished and warped. Otherwise, another great page.

17th Apr 2012, 8:16 AM

It seemed strange to me as well, but time demanded that I work with what I had. :C Deadlines.

I don't think it's the back of the skull itself, since it's normal for it to curve toward the neck near the bottom of your ears. It's something else--maybe the neck or body is too small, or the chin/jaw is too big, or the side of the face is too narrow, or the back of the head is too big, I can't pinpoint it. But yeah, something's off.

Side-views give me trouble, so I'll try to be more careful. :)

Glad you like it otherwise!

17th Apr 2012, 8:32 AM

Ah, yes it is normal for it to do that. Hmm the best advice I can give is that you got her profile right in the banner. It's very minor though, your skill tends to override the small errors.

17th Apr 2012, 2:21 PM

This is a good comic. I'd be elated if mines was half as good.

Anyway, waiting for the next page!

19th Apr 2012, 7:31 PM

Wait, was the chief/shaman/leader guy playing dumb when asking Locke questions? He seems like he knows nothing yet knows something. Just a little confused.

6th Sep 2012, 11:49 PM