Hmmm... switching to .png didn't help with the bubbles :/ Maybe a 1.5 - 2 point stroke on the bubbles? Or is that a good effect? Do you like how it looks?
I realize that it looks weird to me, but I might be in the minority here, and should be learning from you instead of trying to get you to change to what I think is right...
Well done on the art though, I really like the map and the characters are great as usual ;)
What's Oralee gonna do!? Will she tag along? Will Locke let her? Will she just go back home? What is Ilara going to give Locke? Where does Madoc fit into all this? Is his target in Trontia? IS HIS TARGET LOCKE? SO MANY QUESTIONS!!!
Btw I like the way you were doing the bubbles in chapter 1. More specifically towards the end of chapter 1.
Based on the ellipses, I'd say it involves Oralee. Course I have the feeling even if it isn't, Oralee is going to go with Locke anyways. Great page as usual
Beautiful page. The map is a good visual. Nice to get our bearings. I don't see any hitches with the speech bubbles or text. So on my screen it all looks dandy.
@D_Man: It's totally not a bra, I promise. MATT, YOU TROUBLEMAKER.
@Shaggers: So many questions. SO MANY.
Hmm, I've heard that the bubbles in my previous chapter had too much space, so I switched to hand-drawn bubbles for this chapter. Maybe I'll try something new in Chapter 3? Hahaha.
@Zomburai: Haha, I suddenly imagined Locke walking on the World Map like an oldschool RPG game and encountering random jellies and Goblins and stuff. >_>
@Kimmy: Thanks! I'm still trying to get them looking better, though...
@LakethePondling: Thank you~! Oralee is definitely thinking of something... :O
@Moizmad: Haha, that would be helpful, wouldn't it? :I
@D_Man: He'll just throw the amulet at them, and they'll all explode~.
@Midnight: Thanks so much, Midnight! The map was kind of last minute, but it was nice to get some information about the outside world into the page. :D I'm hoping to have a full map ready soon to stick in the About section!
I realize that it looks weird to me, but I might be in the minority here, and should be learning from you instead of trying to get you to change to what I think is right...
Well done on the art though, I really like the map and the characters are great as usual ;)
1st May 2011, 11:06 PM